By Alec Clayton
When reviewing/commenting on the
first draft of my novel Tupelo, Ned
Hayes made reference to Paris Trout
by Pete Dexter. I had read it years before, and I remembered I had been greatly
impressed with it at the time, but I couldn’t remember much about the actual
story or Dexter’s writing style. (One of the great things about getting older
is you can re-read stuff and it’s like you never read it.) So I read Paris Trout again and was astounded at
how good it was. It’s a book that turns Southern Gothic inside out and creates
a whole new genre unlike anything else ever written. The title character is the
strangest and most horrific character I have ever come across in literature. It’s
a cliché to say “I couldn’t put it down.” But if it were not for having to eat
and sleep, I would not have been able to. Paris
Trout is horrifying, hilarious, and compelling.
I mentioned it on Facebook, and my
friend Ned (a great writer in his own right and the person responsible for me
reading it) commented that Dexter is a writer’s writer. Damn right he is.
I loved Paris Trout so much that as soon as I finished reading it I picked
up another Pete Dexter novel, Deadwood.
For the first third or so of Deadwood,
I was slightly disappointed, partly because I could not sense much of a story
arc, and partly because a major character and an American legend, Wild Bill Hickock,
didn’t do much of anything except get drunk, play poker (usually losing) and
shoot things off the head of a dog—a circus-type performance played out
in a bar with an accommodating and trusting dog. But then, starting with a
chapter called China Doll (a Chinese prostitute) it started getting increasingly
more compelling. It’s a true story, and I’ve been told it was meticulously
researched and accurate. The town of Deadwood is beautifully depicted as what
must have been one of the rawest and wildest towns in American history, and
some of the characters such as Calamity Jane and an unnamed “soft brain bottle fiend”
should stick in my mind for as long as I live—in direct contradiction to my
earlier statements about not remembering well.
And again, as soon as I finished
that one, I started another Dexter novel, Spooner.
I’ve barely started it, but already I am floored with Dexter’s writing, the
uniqueness of his characters and how skillfully he weaves together the elements
of a story. If I were a writing teacher, I would use Dexter as an object lesson
in the art of writing. I would talk about how well he uses similes that are creative
and the result of careful observation and memory. For example, in Spooner he describes a profound and
sudden silence as being like when you dive into water and the moment you go
under all sound ceases. When I read that I immediately recalled when I was a
teenager diving off the high board at the swimming pool in Tupelo, the sounds
of all the kids shouting and splashing and laughing melded together as a kind
of symphony as I descended toward the water and became utter silence once my
ears were under water. I had not thought of that in half a century, but Dexter
brought it back to me in such a way that I didn’t just understand the silence
his character experienced, I heard it.
If I were teaching Dexter, I would talk
about the opening paragraph of Spooner.
It is two sentences long; the first sentence is convoluted and poetic and
packed with information. It is followed by a short, bare-boned sentence that
hits with the force of an ax chopping wood. The next paragraph follows the same
kind of pattern, so by the time you have read these first two paragraphs you
are hooked, and you are dying to know about the boy named Spooner who has just
been born. That’s good writing. If you’re looking for books to sink your teeth
into this summer, give Dexter a try.
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